I'm not sure if this is legal or not lol, but my second post is coming minutes after the first.

I went to the club on thursday, kind of sucked. Waited in line for about 45 minutes out side in the cold at around 12:00am. We didn't get in until close to 1:00am. But its always fun hanging out with friends. I had to pay 5 dollars to get in though, so that sucked. 5 dollars used to be a very small amount of money, but now that times are tight, i spent my lunch for this week. lol oh well.

But that was my weekend! hope yours was good as well.

1. Where did you go? Wallmart
2. What did you see? 10 pages worth of notes :P
3. What conclusions can you draw from what you observed? I'm not sure, I think I went to late. I went at 10:00PM
4. How might you integrate these observations into your essay? I'm really not sure, I think I am going to have a rough time.
5. What direction do you see your essay heading in? I really don't know. I need to look over my observations. Right now I do not have my paper done so Its tough.

Final Draft

Everything is done!!!

So I stayed up until 12:00AM and decided to go to bed and work on it in the morning...ya...kind of slept through the alarm. My mom woke me up minutes before I needed to go to work. So then I had to figure out in just a few minutes how to finish my paper. So what do I do? I save the file onto my thumb drive and take it with me to work! So then here I am at work every two seconds looking behind me to make sure that no one is watching me do my paper.

It was very exciting, but thats what happens when you sleep through your alarms ;).

Oh and my friend called my at 1:58 this morning....wonder what thats about.

Comments

I have been so busy, this is the first time I was able to read the comments.

Thanks for the help and the thoughts on my essay. Also that link is fixed. I made a mistake in my code.

Thanks again!

later

Myspace

I got a myspace today for the second time. I still like facebook alot better but w/e.

anyways, check it out. i used a guys template but then added my own twists.

myspace.com/codyaldrich

later

My peer group went well today.

I recieved suggestions on:

I need more sensory discriptions. I need to fix some confusing areas. Add some more thoughts to the story like i did in the last paragraph. Break last sentance up a bit.

I plan on making the revisions that my peer group sugested.
The strength is the conclusion, the weakness is the lack of description and order.
....Maybe ideas on how to impove my essay?

News

Apparently during highschool I created an account at Blogger. So "w00t w00t!" I didnt have to go through the hoops of making a new blog. I still have to rename my blog to match the english standard. I am really looking foward to working on all of the fun GPAWs tonight.

later