Final Draft

Everything is done!!!

So I stayed up until 12:00AM and decided to go to bed and work on it in the morning...ya...kind of slept through the alarm. My mom woke me up minutes before I needed to go to work. So then I had to figure out in just a few minutes how to finish my paper. So what do I do? I save the file onto my thumb drive and take it with me to work! So then here I am at work every two seconds looking behind me to make sure that no one is watching me do my paper.

It was very exciting, but thats what happens when you sleep through your alarms ;).

Oh and my friend called my at 1:58 this morning....wonder what thats about.

Comments

I have been so busy, this is the first time I was able to read the comments.

Thanks for the help and the thoughts on my essay. Also that link is fixed. I made a mistake in my code.

Thanks again!

later

Myspace

I got a myspace today for the second time. I still like facebook alot better but w/e.

anyways, check it out. i used a guys template but then added my own twists.

myspace.com/codyaldrich

later

My peer group went well today.

I recieved suggestions on:

I need more sensory discriptions. I need to fix some confusing areas. Add some more thoughts to the story like i did in the last paragraph. Break last sentance up a bit.

I plan on making the revisions that my peer group sugested.
The strength is the conclusion, the weakness is the lack of description and order.
....Maybe ideas on how to impove my essay?

News

Apparently during highschool I created an account at Blogger. So "w00t w00t!" I didnt have to go through the hoops of making a new blog. I still have to rename my blog to match the english standard. I am really looking foward to working on all of the fun GPAWs tonight.

later